Wednesday, December 14, 2016

Topic 35 Blogging Plus Rewriting A Novel

Greetings,
Happy Holidays to everyone. May you have a great New Year.

Sorry, it's been a while since you've heard from me. I have plenty of excuses but nothing to do with health thank goodness. To be quite honest I ran out of ideas to write about even though my blog clearly indicates books and beyond.

Last night my niece came by and asked for help in creating a blog, which made me feel guilty that I've neglected this one. But life does get in the way, even when trying to rewrite a novel.

My niece has a wonderful way with words but hasn't had time to make use of her passion for writing until now. Being a good aunt, I want to encourage her means of expression. So, the two of us sat down and I explained about blogger.com, the site I use. Sure, there are so many other free sites to use, including Wordpress, but the reason I didn't go with Wordpress was the form one fills out seemed so endless when I looked into it. This blog site didn't seem complicated to set up over a year ago. But do you think I could remember exactly what steps I took first to set it up? No. Of course not.

It also didn't help that my niece wasn't ready to write a profile, etc. and her laptop was acting up. When we finally made it into blogger I helped her come up with a title for her blog and a page address where people can find her.  Without doing anything more to the site we left it, and then went back in several times to make sure the page had been established. This morning she called and said she couldn't get into her blog.  Now, she'll probably have to recreate it. 

Moral of the story: don't create a blog until you're ready to enter all information required. And don't get frustrated in trying to set one up. Once you've created it, you're on your way.

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                           Rewriting a published novel.
For a long time, I have been giving serious thought to rewriting my first novel due to its cost compared to my other novels. I like bundling my books for events, but I always leave that one out of the mix

Over a month ago, a relative did something really nice for us and didn't want to be paid. He loves to read and so I decided to give him a copy of the first novel. For some reason, after I gave it to him I began to page through a copy I had and felt guilty I'd gifted it. I decided then and there it was time to rewrite the novel. Whether it was appropriate or not. And so that's what I've been busy doing for several months now instead of working on my sixth novel. 

Why is it taking so long to do if the material is already on my hard drive? Because it's not. I wrote my first novel on an Apple computer, long gone from this home, and had saved it on a floppy disk, not a flash drive. Luckily, I still had the hard copy I hadn't had the heart to toss in 2003 and began the laborious process of retyping the manuscript again. I sure hope it's worth the time spent on it.

Have any of you novelist ever rewritten a total book after it's been published? I sure would love some feedback. My goal is to have the book available by spring. Wish me luck!  

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author




   

Tuesday, October 4, 2016

Topic 34 Anthologies

Greetings,
Now that summer is officially over and temperatures are cooling down in areas around the world, it's time to get your writing flowing again, especially if you've been lax like me. I don't know what all I did before the fall season hit, but I know my writing suffered this summer.

One thing though that didn't suffer was my chance to meet and talk with people who have a story to tell but are afraid to dip their feet in the writing waters  Are you afraid to dip your feet too--go out on a limb and produce a short story or poem?

There are so many ways to share a short story or poem besides a novel or Chap book. Writing for an anthology is one possibility. Not only is it a great way to get published, but you wouldn't believe how many readers, with little time on their hands, would rather purchase an anthology.

What is an anthology? According to the Merriam-Webster dictionary, an anthology is a collection of writings (such as poems or short stories) by different authors.

Many anthologies revolve around a particular theme, but not all. The length of a short story for anthologies varies depending on the rules set up by the group or person creating the anthology. Anthologies I've submitted short stories for have requested writers limit their word count between 2,500 to 4,500. Although I have seen requests for up to 7,500 words. Accepted stories usually run between 8 to 9 pages in length.

I'd suggest submitting your story early since there's a limited amount of short stories accepted for submission. One anthology I read several years ago contained stories by 29 authors. But two anthologies I  submitted stories for accepted only 19 authors, and another just 11.

If you have short stories or poems you'd like to submit but haven't seen any advertisement concerning anthologies for your area, don't despair. Just Goggle Anthology Submissions.

This past year I submitted  stories for two anthologies, one in Minnesota and one in Florida. Both anthology creations ran into different problems. The Minnesota anthology, mysteries involving food, had too many submissions and as luck would have it mine wasn't selected. But here's the good news. The organizers of this anthology decided to do a Part Two book with the same theme and asked if they could still use my story. The Florida anthology this year was accepting stories of any genre as well as poems, and they didn't have to revolve around Florida. The problem this group ran into was not receiving enough submissions, meaning it probably wouldn't be produced. So, when an e-mail arrived this past week showing the cover of the new Florida anthology, I was pleasantly surprised.    

As a writer, I've found writing one short story is a lot easier than whipping up a novel, and it doesn't require as much time. You never know when a short story you've written might fit perfectly with a new anthology being produced. Over the years I've written many short stories to share in writers' groups never thinking they might be used at a later date for an anthology. Luckily, I saved them. Within the past two years, I've been able to make use of two stories I had tucked away.

If you've got a story to tell, don't put it off. The one you write and submit to an anthology may just catch an agent's eye.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Author of Short Stories and Novels

Sunday, September 4, 2016

Topic 33 Plotting a Mystery

Greetings,
If your brains cells are already thinking of a great mystery revolving around the picture I've provided, your half way there. But keep in mind there's more than an idea to consider. You need great characters with fears and desires and a plot.

When writing mystery fiction you need to constantly think  about the characters, especially the protagonist. Where is he/she in the beginning of the story? What happens to them along the way? Has the case stumped them enough? If the character doesn't run into any bumps along the way, you probably need to rework your plot.
   
Something that I've found helpful in writing mysteries is to watch those presented on television.  Take for example Inspector Morris on PBS. Many of  the cases he's involved with present three or four suspects, creating a better plot. 

Of course, the first person Morris interviews after a crime has been committed is the person everyone else has pointed the finger at. The first twist comes into play when the Number 1 suspect is murdered. What does Morris do now? Inspector Morris moves on to suspects two and three who Morris thinks are possibly in cahoots with each other. But after listening to their claims of innocence, the Inspector doesn't have any proof to indicate otherwise. The case is stalled, but not for long.

Will Morris ever solve the crimes? His boss puts pressure on him to find out who murdered X and Y. He suddenly gets cantankerous with people around him. The stress is getting to him.  After much digging, he learns of suspect Number four and drills him. Big problem. Morris believes this suspect is not guilty. Ready to pull out his hair he wonders where to turn next. Luckily, something major happens in the nick of time. The actual suspect is someone who was around at the time of murders but so lost in themselves, no one gave them a thought. {Think fly on the wall. But remember they have to be introduced near the beginning of the story.} 

Ending: Suspect tries to trap Morris and flees . Morris escapes from whatever, is thrown his way, gives chase, and captures the killer. He receives praise from his boss and celebrates with significant other or co-worker.  

Besides studying excellent mysteries provided for our entertainment on TV, don't forget to read mystery stories too. Discover how other authors handle plot to keep their stories moving.  

In the weeks to come, think about how your characters are going to move forward to keep the reader's interest. Remember plot and characters drive the story, the story doesn't drive them.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Writer of Short Stories and Novels 
     

Monday, August 1, 2016

Topic 32 Writing Memoirs

GREETINGS,
Time sure flys when summer gets here, doesn't it? It's already August 1st. Unfortunately, summer's not my only excuse for missing my schedule of two blogs every month again. You see I decided to discuss memoir writing, but I couldn't find my notes until last night, and then someone else in the family was busy with the computer.
     Everyone has a story in them to tell. Be it from early childhood, teen years, or as an adult. I'm sure if Mr. Bear in the picture above could speak our language he'd have one heck of a tale or two to share too.    
    A Memoir is not the same as an autobiography. An autobiography covers a timeline from birth to old age. The memoir focuses on a specific time in the person's life. For example, the time you and your twin had your tonsils out; a specific travel experience; the birth of a child; a military experience. An author friend of mine wrote what his life was like living with eight siblings. 
    Your memoir can cover other subjects too like a serious illness you or a family member suffered. And don't forget about the raging fire, tornado, hurricane or flood that swept through your town.  
    Before you get started writing, make a list of the most significant things that have occurred in your life. Then ask yourself the following questions:
1.What's the purpose of the story/book? 2.Who is your audience? 3.What makes the topic you've chosen interesting?    
    No matter what topic you finally select to write about remember to open up and share your emotions, use the five senses. 
    When I attended a memoir writing class years ago, the instructor recommended we partner up with another person writing memoirs to get feedback. That's an excellent suggestion. 
    Here are a few topics I've written about over the years and shared only in a writer's group. Pillars of Strength (remembering two terrific male neighbors on the lake). Until Death Do Us Part (about the death of a loved one). A Mere Stumble Makes A Difference (the 4th of July I broke my ankle). Meditation on My Mother (glimpses of my 92-year-old mother). Pilgrimage for Dad (Trip with family to Ireland after Dad died).    
    Memoirs aren't hard to write. Just remember to make a list of possible topics first and then select the one that draws your emotions out and strongly engages the reader.
    Happy writing.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Novelist


Monday, July 11, 2016

Topic 31 Vacation Inspirational for this Writer-Part Two

Greetings,
Sometimes it pays to go off the beaten path, whether it be while on vacation or working. A new or fascinating discovery usually catches our eye along the way that we wouldn't have seen taking the same dull route as everyone else. Such was the case when we drove and walked around Quebec this past June.   

The photo I captured above is one such example. In my last blog I mentioned my French Canadian relatives, but I never expected to come across a sign with my husband's surname. We figured relatives on his dad side probably came through Canada, like my mother's side of the family did, but we weren't certain. You see, his father was adopted and we never met his family. 

I never noticed the name on the building as we traveled down the wrong street our third day in Quebec. It was the art work depicting Quebec's history that caught my attention. A history Lab I taught at in Minnesota years ago covered the early years of the state and one topic I shared included fur traders and missionaries and how they traveled from Canada through Wisconsin and into Minnesota. In a rush to take a photo of the art before it was out of sight, I didn't realize I had caught the names on the building as well. 

Quebec is a friendly city. I felt so at home in Quebec even though I only knew a few French words. Maybe it was because so many of my relatives, including my mother's father came from the area. But I think it was more than that. The people of Quebec made it special. French is spoken but they speak English as well. 

The walking tour of Old Quebec was excellent. The guide we had been assigned, who spoke very good English, found he had too many people in his group and we were asked to join another group. The woman with a thick French accent, who we thought we'd have a hard time understanding, gave an excellent tour. She used to be a history teacher and she covered the battles between France and England, spoke about the churches, businesses and architecture of the homes. She even pointed out the style of homes the Irish built when they arrived, relatives from my dad's side.

After the walking tour, we were on our own. I wanted to see the inside of the Cathedral of Notre Dame, but of course we  wound up in a different area. Wrong turns of course, but we got to listen to a street performer instead. The performers have to be registered and can only remain on the same spot for two hours then they have to shift to another corner.

 It was because we couldn't find our way to other sights outside of Quebec City, our third day there, that we ended up going too far on the wrong road and eventually found ourselves in Old Quebec again. So we decided to try and find Notre Dame Cathedral. While searching for the church, we found a side street full of artists. Their paintings and drawings were on display. Such talented work. Another thing we stumbled upon was an open air music and food festival. Have you ever seen singers dressed in chef outfits? 

We had arrived in Old Quebec because we had gotten lost somehow and when we left Old Quebec we got tangled up again. This time hubby didn't listen to me say, "Make a left here, now." It turned out all right. We discovered things we wouldn't have seen if we'd returned to the hotel on the road that passes by the St. Lawrence Seaway. We saw a beautiful park, stone arches surrounding Old Quebec, the art I shared with you above, neighborhoods with unique houses and many street cafes.  

Everyone needs a respite from juggling a million things a day. This year take a journey off the beaten path and see where it leads you. Who knows the trip might kick start your writing.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
A Minnesota Mystery Author  


Wednesday, June 29, 2016

Topic 30 Vacations Help Writer's Block


Bonjour ,
I bet you thought I forgot about blogging in June. Well, I didn't. I just returned from a wonderful adventure through Canada and Maine that has really got my creative juices flowing again. Now, I have to sit down, take pen to paper or fingers to keyboard, and actually start writing the story.

The last time you read my blog I said we'd cover novel's I've read and I'd point out the mundane information in the stories, but that
would entail including more than one line of a story and take up too much time. Besides, I'm certain the subject matter would bore you to death, no pun intended from this mystery author, especially if you're an avid reader like me and already skim excess filler to reach the heart of a story. Wouldn't it be great if authors who write long winded stories suddenly realized their novels didn't have to be between 400 and 1000 pages to still produce a super story?

My travel journey by car started around the beginning of June and lasted until we got back to Minnesota on June 21. We wound through a bit of Northern Minnesota, Wisconsin, andUpper Michigan before crossing into Canada via Sault St, Marie and continuing on to Ottawa, Quebec, and Camden, Maine.

Early that morning when we left home, the sun promised a glorious day and we wore shorts to stay cool. But by the time we reached the welcome center at the Northwest Portal of Wisconsin we were ready for long pants and winter jackets: the sun had departed and the temperature dropped sharply. We didn't complain about the change in temperature quite yet, though. How could we with the fabulous views of Lake Superior poking its head constantly through the trees for our enjoyment? 

Crossing the bridge over the Sault St. Marie locks,which allow water to flow from Lake Superior to the Lower Great Lakes, was a grand treat too despite the gentle patter of rain. I wish I had better photos of the locks but the rails along the bridge make picture taking difficult. When we finally reached our first stop, a hotel destination for the night in Sault St. Marie Ontario, the wind was blowing so hard the car doors felt like they were going to be torn off their hinges and we thought we'd be blown back to Minnesota. I'm not joking. Even the Canadians, clad in shorts like us who traipsed into the hotel alongside us wondered what happened to the nice day they had started out with. 

We had never driven into this Canadian area before and would've liked to have explored Sault Ste. Marie which sits close to the U.S.-Canadian border before we left for Ottawa and beyond in the morning, but this twosome was too pooped to do any sightseeing in the windy, rainy city that night. In case you're wondering, yes, there are two Sault St. Maries. The other resides on the northeastern edge of Michigan. 

I'll stop here for now with my travels. Our adventures through Quebec's Old Town (See photo at top of this blog) the home of my French-Canadian relatives will continue in the next blog. 

Remember, keep writing and reading.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author












Tuesday, May 24, 2016

Topic 29 Honoring Deceased Authors Who Served in the Military




Greetings,
My last blog mentioned I'd be exploring books I've read and point out what I considered unnecessary fluff or filler and see if you agreed with me. But, since Memorial Day, a Federal holiday in the U.S., is fast approaching, I felt it's only fitting that we honor deceased writers who served in the military. I'm sure you'll recognize many of the authors listed and their works. If you've never had a chance to read any works by these authors, it's not too late to check them out. Great reference material too if you need to write about a specific era.


Erich Maria Remarque--All Quiet on the Western Front (1929)

Henri Barbusse's (served as a stretcher-bearer on the front lines) --Under Fire (1916)

A.P. Herbert--The Secret Battle (1919)

Ralph Hale Mottram--Death of a Hero (1929)

Victor Maslin Yeates--Winged Victory (1934)

Ford Maddox--a tetralogy of novels Parade's End (1924-1927)

W. Somerset Maugham (served in the Ambulance Corp) --Ashenden: or the British Agent (1928)

Captain John Hay Beith (a memoir  of life in the army) --The First Hundred Thousand (1915)

Enid Bagnold--A Diary Without Dates (1918)

 Leo Tolstoy--War and Peace (1869)

Antony Powell--What's Become of Warimg  (1939)

Charles Lindbergh--The Spirit of St. Louis (1953)

F. Scott Fitzgerald--This Side of Paradise  (1920)


Until Next Time
This Is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author

Tuesday, May 10, 2016

Topic 28 Resurrecting Life Experiences


Greeting,

A year ago this month to be exact, I started this blog. I named it Marlene Chabot Books and Beyond so I could easily move on from writing to other topics of interest. I'm thinking it would be fun to look at pieces of writing from books I've read or you've read and discuss what works or doesn't work for us the reader. I don't want to make this into a review of books we've read-I do enough of that on Goodreads. I hope you'll want to come along for the ride. I need your input so please do contact me.

Okay. Enough said on where I plan to go with this blog. Let's look at topics on writing as shared by some "Writer Unboxed" blogs. Today I came across the perfect quote from Stephen King on this wonderful site that is sure to get us writers motivated. "Write what you like, then imbue it with life and make it unique by blending in your own personal knowledge of friendship, relationships, and work. Especially work...."

We all have jobs of some sort, incorporate those skills and war stories into the story. John Grisham, who was a lawyer,  writes about lawyers. Robin Cook, a doctor, writes medical suspense novels. Agatha Christie helped in the medical field as a young woman and learned about all sorts of poisons. Nevada Barr, a retired park ranger, used her experience to write her mysteries.  I'm sure you could name many more authors who incorporated their life skills into their works of fiction. non-fiction, and poetry.  Besides focusing on our jobs, Keith Cronin-"Take Your Reader To Another World" Writer Unboxed blog May 10, 2016, says writers should also focus on how living in a specific area or time period affected us emotionally. We each have our own viewpoint, no two are alike, not even siblings.

The setting of your novel is extremely important too. It can easily draw a reader in or turn them away. It can also help reinforce the character's emotional state. Using your emotional experiences what places, music, etc. excited you the most? How did you feel? Donald Maass author of the article "Pixie Dust" in Writer Unboxed May 4, 2016, says, "There are everyday delights and then there are delights of a lifetime...."  Are we putting those delights into our writings for others to enjoy?

Happy writing-dig deep and resurrect your delights.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author

Thursday, April 14, 2016

Topic 27 Backstory

BACKSTORY

Greetings, 
Lately, just about every article popping up in my e-mail these days pertains to backstory and how important it is to the tale you're writing. But what is backstory? And is it as important as so many people seem to be stressing? 

According to Wikipedia, "...backstory is a set of events invented for a plot, presented as preceding and leading up to that plot." For example the history of the main character. Sometimes the backstory is presented in a prologue. But, from what I've seen with the books I've recently read, many authors are doing away with prologue and are inserting their backstory in the first pages of the tale instead.

Editors and agents alike judge a book by the first page. Is the story drawing them in right off the bat? What's going on with the protagonist? If they don't see what they're looking for, the story gets set aside.

Ray Rhamey, who writes FLOG A PRO for Writer Unboxed, loves having his readers vote on whether the  first page of a bestselling author would be enough for the reader to want more. He doesn't reveal who the author is until after we've voted. I hate to say it, but many beginnings of well-known authors in Rhamey's presentation didn't convince me to want to read more. Luckily, Rhamey agreed with me. A very high percentage of the various author's first pages didn't give you a clue about the protagonist at all. They were just describing other people around them, the scenery, etc.   

Today, I'll use books from my bookshelf in demonstrating whether backstory has been introduced right away. The copyrights of these books range from 1969 to 2012.

1. A Nun in the Closet by Dorothy Gilman. The first sentence of the prologue--"At the Abbey of St. Tabitha the sisters met to discuss gravely which of the seventeen among them should leave the abbey and go out into the world..."  Six pages later, in Chapter 1, we finally learn about the personal background of the two nuns selected to leave the Abbey, Sister John and Sister Hyacinthe.

2. Tracks by Louise Erdrich. First two sentences of the first chapter--"We started dying before the snow, and like the snow, we continued to fall. It was surprising there were so many of us left to
die. " We find out what the Indian's been through in the fourth paragraph of Chapter 1.

3. Mutant Message Down Under by Marlo Morgan. First three sentences of Chapter 1--"It seems there should have been some warning, but I felt none. Events were already in motion. The group of predators sat, miles away, awaiting their prey." Paragraphs six and seven in chapter 1 delve into the main character's story.

4. Nano by Robin Cook. First sentence from the prologue--"The cyclist decided to go for a relaxing ride--the real training would resume on Tuesday, after he underwent more medical tests." Right away we are given background on the cyclist. Paragraphs that follow fill us in more. But Pia Grazdani's story, the main character in Nano, isn't present until Chapter 1.

5. Deep South by Nevada Barr. First chapter. "The rambler's headlights caught a scrap of paper nailed to a tree, a handwritten sign: REPENT. Darkness swallowed it..."  Paragraph 3 and 8 give Anna Pigeon's background.

6. A Case of Need by Michael Crichton. Beginning of Chapter 1--"ALL HEART SURGEONS ARE BASTARDS, and Conway is no exception." Right after the first sentence, Crichton tells us Conway sweeps into the room angry and what he does whenever he's mad and what his face looks like in that situation. The third paragraph tells us  about Conway's work, etc.   

We all know how important it is to have a great first sentence or two to grab the reader's attention. I've even covered that topic in a previous blog. But as far as the character's background story, I like to weave information about the main character throughout the story and not give it all away in the beginning. How about you? Please feel free to share and comment regarding today's blog. 

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author

Monday, April 4, 2016

Topic 26 Sharing A Story



Greetings,
Before I get onto today's topic, I'd like to apologize for not keeping my promise to write two blogs a month. I honestly planned to write one after Easter but the week rapidly disappeared with all the scheduled activities this household had going on, including a birthday. Before I knew it April 1st had arrived.

Also, I'd like to announce the recent  release of my fifth mystery novel on Amazon. If you like amateur sleuth mysteries in the style of Agatha Christie, you'll enjoy this one. It's about a missing college student and a jewel heist. I always toss in a bit of humor and romance. The book will be available for Amazon Europe too. This week I plan to have the book formatted for e-book distribution.

Now, on to today's topic. I don't know about you, but I love Spring. It's wonderful to have the windows open and listen to all the birds singing away. This morning 10 robins landed on a tree outside our balcony window and nibbled away at berries left on the branches from last year. It's nice to know they have some sort of nourishment before the ground thaws enough so they can catch worms.

Writers, like Robins, frequently find themselves nibbling away at stories they've put on the back burner, hoping someday they'll feel polished enough to share with the world. But many of us have trouble deciding when the information should be released. As I mentioned in Topic 25, I entered a writing competition. It was with Neoverse. Well, I didn't end up winning anything, but I was being considered as a finalist. Of course, I felt bad when I didn't win. Especially, since I shared with so many people I had entered a contest. However, once I read that I was competing against thousands and thousands of entries across the U.S. and Canada and I landed in the top 5% category, I pulled my head out of the sand.

I really feel this story should be shared, especially since it's so relevant to what's going on in the world today. So I've decided not to wait for another contest and share THE SCARF, a fiction story, with you.

THE SCARF
 One end of the chocolate-and-eggshell-blue speckled scarf fluttered in the gentle breeze high above the driver side of a Ford Focus partially raised up over a piece of south lane curbing on Emerson Avenue; the other remained contentedly wrapped around the occupant’s delicate cream-colored neck resting on the car’s windowsill.
 What an evening for a traffic jam, Abigail Mc Pherson thought, stomping on her brakes for the third time in five minutes; everyone’s heading out of town to celebrate the Fourth of July, including her.    
It took ten more minutes of stops and starts before Abigail’s car got within range of what she believed to be the cause of the traffic buildup, a black Ford. Curious, like most other drivers who had passed by already, the woman’s gray steely eyes tried to discover what hid behind the thick circle of men in blue buzzing around the Ford. Darn! She couldn’t see the driver, too many cops. But wait. There seems to be loose fabric floating above their heads. Is it a scarf? Yes. The driver must be a woman. But what’s her problem?
Abigail took a second look at the scarf. It seemed familiar. Too familiar. Nausea swept over her. “No!” she gulped. Her young hands trembled. “It can’t be.” She inhaled deeply as she stretched out her hand to turn on the Honda’s emergency flashers. The car ahead of her noticed her intentions and made space available. Two seconds later Abigail’s car door slammed and she darted to the other side of Emerson Avenue.
 As she stumbled along now, drawing ever nearer to the police hovering like mountain lions, she began to question her actions. Could she cope with more bad news today? She didn’t think so. Over lunch at work her best friend shared she’d been recently diagnosed with breast cancer. Shocked to the core, Abigail barely managed to squeak out a ”Sorry”.    
A clean-shaven policeman, newly graduated from Minnesota’s Westport Police Academy tried to deter her from advancing further. “Stop, Miss. I need to see your credentials.” She gave him an icy stare. He didn’t let up. “Only emergency crew and news reporters are allowed beyond this yellow tape. Are you either of those?” 
“No,” she stammered, “but I’m concerned about the victim’s condition.”
Officer Pete Johnson adjusted the visor of his dark-blue cap to shield his eyes from the
glaring sun. The woman seemed genuinely upset. He softened. “Sorry, but I’m not allowed to let you go any closer. Tomorrow’s paper will have all the details. You’ll have to wait till then.”
The twenty-something woman attempted a feeble smile, remembering politeness is better than a hot temper. “I understand. But couldn’t you at least share what happened?”
The newbie cop swiftly digested her request. What harm could it do? “A woman was shot.”
“Oh my God!” Abigail’s eyes jumped beyond the policeman now. She saw a snow-white head leaning out the car window with part of the billowing scarf still attached to the neck. “How… how badly is she hurt?” When no reply came, a high-pitched wail escaped her quivering lips.
Officer Johnson scanned the crowd. Someone else had to have heard the piercing noise besides him. Hopefully, they won’t realize he’s partially to blame. He didn’t need a complaint filed against him this early in his career.    
Focus on the police work, Johnson, he told himself. You help people no matter what the cost.  He swiftly set aside his concern for his reputation and allowed compassion to take over. He touched Abigail’s arm. It felt frail. “Are you all right, Miss?”
The woman’s mouth didn’t open.
Sergeant Alice Brandon moved in. She had been keeping close tabs on her department’s newest rookie since they arrived on the scene. “Everything okay here, Johnson?”
Johnson stepped aside to make way for his boss. “I... I’m not sure, Ma’am.”  
Sergeant Brandon studied the badly shaken woman dressed in a two-piece business suit similar in color to the scarf. “What’s going on, Miss? We can’t help unless you tell us what’s troubling you.”
Forced to speak despite her mental anguish, Abigail raised her head and said, “Why... Why was the woman shot?”
Sergeant Brandon couldn’t believe what she heard. She gave the rookie a sharp look, before returning her attention to the woman. “What’s your name?”
“Abigail Mc Pherson,” she stated through tears.
“Do you know the woman in the car?”
She sighed heavily. “Yes. She’s my grandmother. Why would someone kill a sweet, elderly woman?”
“I don’t know,” Sergeant Brandon honestly replied, “but I intend to find out.” She hated this part of the job the most. Watching someone grieve over the death of a loved one and
not knowing how to comfort them. “We’re looking into the possibility that your grandmother was killed by a stray bullet meant for a rival gang member. There’s been a surge of gang-related activity in this part of town over the last two years.”
Abigail retrieved a Kleenex from her suit jacket and attempted to wipe her nose. “My father suggested that she move closer to us last year, but Grandma Ida adamantly refused. She loved this neighborhood. She said if the neighborhood was good enough to be born in it was certainly good enough to die in.” She sucked in her breath.
“Grandma Ida sounds like one determined woman.”
“She was.”
            Before the middle-aged policewoman could add anything else, the Westport ambulance came to a screeching halt in front of them and paramedics flew into action. A tall female in her early-thirties swung the back of the emergency vehicle open while the forty-year-old-dark-skinned male driver approached Sergeant Brandon. “Did you call this in?”
The sergeant shifted her black well-worn oxford shoes to get a better view of the emergency medical technician addressing her. She had worked with him before. “Yeah, Chuck,” she replied tiredly, wondering when the gang revelries would end.
“What morgue should we use? St. John’s or Fairfax?”
The policewoman decided to let the victim’s relative make the decision. “Which hospital is handier for your family, Abigail?”
Ida’s granddaughter sucked in air. “Fairfax.”
Chuck returned to his partner and helped hoist the gurney on to the ground and over to the Ford. Before opening the left front door to gain access to Ida’s body, Jessica gently lifted the elderly woman’s small head, removed the long flowing scarf from around her neck, and handed it to Officer Johnson who had donned rubber gloves.
Johnson placed the scarf in a bag along with all the other non-car related items he had collected. Then the EMT crew lifted the elderly woman’s body out of the car and wheeled it back to the ambulance.
Overcome by emotion, Abigail left Sergeant Brandon behind and rushed to the gurney holding her deceased grandmother. “Please, let me say good-bye,” she begged. 
Brandon nodded her approval.
Officer Johnson finally returned to his supervisor’s side and handed off the sealed bag which she immediately scrutinized. The scarf troubled her. Perhaps the young woman could help. “Abigail.”
“Yes?”
“Was your grandmother a follower of Islam?”
 “A what?”
Brandon repeated herself. “A follower of Islam? A Muslim?”
Abigail frowned. What did Grandmother Ida’s beliefs have to do with her death? “Oh?” She thrust her hand towards the bag Sergeant Brandon held. “It’s the scarf, the hijab, isn’t it?” The policewoman nodded. “It was a gift. Grandma and a neighbor lady, originally from Iraq, became inseparable over the years, almost like sisters. They shared everything: sewing techniques, philosophy on raising children and food preparation.”
Brandon couldn’t help noticing how Abigail’s speaking of her grandmother was taking its toll. “It’s a lovely scarf,” she remarked soothingly. “Obviously it meant a great deal to her.”
“It did.”
“Any idea why your grandmother wore it on such an incredibly hot day?”
The young woman’s tears disappeared and were replaced by a tiny smile. “Grandma hated air conditioning. It bothered her head.” She directed her eyes towards the Focus. “That’s why the windows are open. Of course, open windows mess up the hair, and Grandma was a stickler for neatness. Wearing a scarf solved her problem.”
The ambulance pulled away now and Sergeant Brandon promised to keep the Mc Pherson’s informed as the investigation moved forward.
***
Several weeks into the case concerning Ida Mc Pherson’s untimely death, small snippets of information began to flow into Sergeant Brandon’s police station. One call today suggested there was a drug war between two known gangs and the old woman happened to get caught in the crossfire. Even if it was false information, Brandon wasn’t ruling it out. Her team would verify the story.                                               
The policewoman looked up from her notes and found Westport’s police chief, Gary Hanson, approaching her desk. What did he have on his mind? she wondered. “Hello, Chief.  What brings you to my turf? If you heard we have donuts to share, that’s a myth. No time to stop by the bakery this morning.”
Chief Hanson, a heavy-set fellow, didn’t find Brandon’s comment amusing. The furrows on his thick forehead grew even deeper. “I didn’t come here for donuts,” he said rather dryly. “I want to know what’s happening with the Mc Pherson case. It’s been almost a month since her death, and the family is seeking answers.”
Picking up on her boss’s irritation, Sergeant Brandon calmly replied, “We’re making some headway with the leads that have come in, Chief, but no home run yet.” She
picked up the note lying on her desk and waved it in front of him. “This new bit of information came in five minutes ago.”
“Good. Get someone on it pronto. How about the neighbors? Anyone offered up reliable information yet?”
Sergeant Brandon shook her head. “Mc Pherson was highly respected. No one had anything negative to say.” She grabbed another paper. “After retiring from her long teaching career, she offered free tutor services to her neighbors, mostly new immigrants.”
Chief Hanson appeared to be appeased by what Brandon had said. He began to step away from her desk. But then bam, his heavy body jerked to a halt, and his mouth slid open. “What about the bullet?”
The sergeant hurriedly dug through the paperwork on her desk again. “According to Wilson, it was a 308.”                   
“Probably came from an M-24 Remington rifle. I can’t picture a gang member running around with a piece like that. Can you?”
Brandon swiped the palm of her hand across her desk. “No, Sir.”
“Well,” the chief said, “I’ll leave you to your work then.”
When Chief Hanson left the confines of Sergeant Brandon’s desk behind, Officer Johnson replaced him. “Sergeant.”
“Johnson, just the person I wanted to see. I got a call concerning rival gang activity the afternoon Ida Mc Pherson got shot. I want you and Warner to dig a little deeper. Expand your inquiries to the blocks surrounding Emerson Avenue.”
“Okay. We’ll get right on it. But you might want someone to check out information we received on our tip hotline too.”
Brandon tilted her head back slightly. “What have you got?”
“An elderly woman called it in. She lives a block off Emerson, near where we think Ida Mc Pherson was fatally shot. She said she remembers seeing a guy in her alley that day carrying what looked like a rifle over his shoulder. She thought it odd since hunting season isn’t for a couple months yet.”
“She’s the first person to mention a rifle. Do you think she’s a believable witness?”         Johnson gazed at the worn oak floor beneath his feet. “She’s still working as a seamstress at a very elite dress shop.”
“Description?”
The young officer scratched his head searching for a reply.
Brandon tapped her pen on the desk. “I’m waiting Johnson.”
“Sorry. I was trying to recall exactly what she said. “A white guy. Mid-fifties. About 5' 11". She said his build’s the same as her favorite daytime soap opera character, Tony, a professional golfer.”
The policewoman mulled over the information. “Does she drive?”
“No,” Johnson hastily reported, “but she said her daughter could bring her tomorrow.”
“Before you leave with Warner, call her back. Find out what time she can arrive. I want to have a sketch artist on hand.”
“Okay.”
“And, Johnson …”
“Yes?”
“Good job.”
At nine the next morning a tall, thin woman in her seventies, impeccably dressed in a lime-colored two-piece suit, swept into precinct 29 with a much younger woman following close on her heels. The older woman wasted no time in finding an available policeman to tell him she was here to see Sergeant Brandon. 
Officer Stanley grinned. “Name please?”
“Mary Sweeney.”
He gazed at the short list of names given to him just moments before, and then he punched in the sergeant’s number. “Mary Sweeny is here.”   
“Please direct her to my desk.”
Sergeant Brandon made friendly eye contact with Mary the moment she reached her desk. She wanted to make her feel comfortable. Mary responded accordingly. “Thanks for coming, Ms. Sweeney. We’ll try not to keep you too long.”
“Thank you. I appreciate that.” She quickly glanced at the man already seated by the officer’s desk.
Brandon noted her concern and explained as she pointed to an empty chair. “This is Bill, our sketch artist. He’s ready to capture everything you say. All we’d like you to do is reply the best you can to his questions concerning the man’s features.”
As soon as Mary got situated, Bill lifted his drawing materials off his lap and fired questions one after the other. “Pudgy face, long, square? Moles? Any scars? Beard or mustache? Hair style?”
Two hours later, after Mary’s departure, Officer Johnson delivered bad news to his boss. “We got zilch, Sarge. The sketch didn’t match any mug shots.”
“Dam!” Brandon dragged her hand through her dark, short cropped hair, staring intently at a copy of Bill’s sketch resting on her desk as she did so. The drawing showed a bald-headed man with a high forehead, round face and large cauliflower ears. “Something’s got to break,” she spouted to no one in particular.
Not knowing if he should take leave, Officer Johnson prattled on. “That older lady has an uncanny memory, doesn’t she?”
The policewoman dropped her hand to her side. “Time will tell. All right, Johnson, I need you to fax this picture to the local news station and request it run on tomorrow’s news. We’ve already missed today’s deadline.”
It turned out posting the picture wasn’t necessary after all. That same evening Westport police got their break. A distraught woman called 911 begging for help. “My husband’s locked himself in the bathroom and won’t come out. Says he plans to kill himself,” She sobbed, “I’m afraid he will. He’s been hitting the bottle hard since that old lady died on Emerson, and he’s never even met her.”
Sergeant Brandon compared the picture in her hand to the man her fellow officers had just settled in the isolation room. It had to be him. She went over to the nearly-empty coffee machine, filled two cups, and headed towards the room where the man was seated. Hopefully it’s not going to be another long night, she thought.
Officer Johnson opened the door for his boss. “Thanks,” she said, “Call Abigail Mc Pherson. I promised to let her know as soon as we had a suspect in custody.”
“Yes, Ma’am.”
The door closed behind her now as she strolled into the isolation room. Once she reached the table where the suspect sat, she set the coffee on the table in front of him and sat down.
Lowell Perry greedily drained the two cups of strong coffee in nothing flat.
“Ready to talk?” she asked, eager to get this over with.
 Perry placed his hands flat on the table and nodded. “Ever since the army notified me of our son’s death in Iraq, I haven’t been coping well.” He braced his forehead with his hands for a moment. “My wife thinks its depression. I don’t know. Maybe she’s right. Anyway, a few months back I got this crazy notion if I showed those people what it felt like to lose a loved one, I’d feel better. Except it didn’t work. I feel like shit.”
“Well, here’s another newsflash, Lowell. The woman you shot wasn’t a foreigner. She was a Westport native.”
“But, but she was wearing that scarf.”
“The hijab?
“Why would she do that?”
“It was a gift.”
Perry cried, “Oh God!” before his head smacked the table.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author and Freelance Writer

Thursday, March 17, 2016

Topic 25 Perseverance

Greetings,
Happy St. Paddy's day.
Spring is in the air. Major League Baseball teams are winding down at their Spring Training Camps and gearing up for Opening day in their respective states. If you've ever had a chance to speak to a player about the game, you know how excited they're about what they do for a living. They've honed their skills over the years and love to talk about the game.

Many baseball players probably started off playing ball with family members and from there moved on to T-ball at a neighborhood park. Their first coaches taught them an important fact--practicing in between games helps them perform better. As they matured, they graduated to different levels of playing: middle school, high school, even college. Eventually, all those hours of practicing to improve their playing skills pays off. A baseball scout spots them and recommends them for a Minor League spot. But it doesn't stop there. The baseball player continues to persevere and works even harder on his skills, proving he's ready for the Major Leagues.

Like a baseball player, a writer needs to continue to hone their skills so they too may one day become part of the Major Leagues and be published by a traditional publishing house. It's not easy to convince one of the big publishing houses to sign you on, I should know, I've been writing since 1995, but if you don't persevere you'll never know if your dream could've come true.

We need to keep on writing. Hone our skills. We've talked about attending writing seminars, attending classes to improve our writing and joining writers groups. But when we're working on a novel, it's hard to find extra time. One thing I've been doing these past four years is writing short stories for different anthologies. Don't forget, anthologies expose your writing to others too. Usually, the ones I've participated in have a deadline of August. The time frame is perfect. My new novel comes out in the spring and I take a short break before starting the  next one.

Writing stories for contests is another way to sharpen your writing skills. Even if you don't win a thing. To be honest, I had gotten tired of sending in stories to various contests and never hearing anything. But this past December, I decided to persevere and enter another interesting contest.
Guess what? Two weeks ago I received notice that I'm a finalist in the contest. I couldn't believe it. I'm on pins and needles. All the tweaking I did with this particular story, in between each contest it was submitted to, finally paid off. I'll share about the contest next blog when I hear where I actually placed.

So keep persevering. Write your heart out. You never know when the surprise notice beginning with "Your writing's been selected" will cross your threshold via mail or e-mail.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author

Sunday, February 28, 2016

Topic 24 Publishing with Createspace

                                                          Self-Publishing-"Oh, no!"
Greetings,
I hope you've enjoyed the last weeks of February as much as I have, at least outdoors anyway. I think I mentioned in a previous post that I wanted my fifth novel available by spring, but there was a slight hitch. The previous publisher I used didn't notify me till the end of November they wouldn't be taking on my book.  So what did I do? I spoke with other authors who have used Createspace to get their books published. Many of them seemed satisfied, so I decided to take the leap.

If you are new to Createspace, I would suggest attending a class on how everything works or sit down with someone who has used it and have them walk you through the steps. Just going on the Createspace home page by myself wasn't sufficient for me. The first step, creating an account, was easy once my friend explained I had to establish an account in order to upload my novel or work with a cover. The next step is downloading the Createspace template for your novel. I chose the 6x9 size since my other novels are that size. You'll need to copy your original work and paste it into your template.

When my account was opened and the novel was saved in the 6x9 template, I uploaded my photo for the cover and worked with Createspace cover templates. Once that's done you can experiment with color backgrounds, and the design fonts too. I tried various designs and colors. I found a color I liked but not the template. Createspace offers cover assistance for a fee, but you also can find your own designer. Luckily for me, the person from my Florida writer's group, who helped walked me through the first few steps on Createspace, told me she does templates for covers. I just needed to send her the photo. The finished product choices for covers are matte and gloss. I chose gloss.

Of course there are other decisions to be made too. The description of your novel. What do you want readers to see on Amazon? What outlets do you want your book available for? Libraries? Universities? How about the price of your book?  One author I know suggested checking what other authors in your field are charging for the same size book. Another author, who has several books in the market, said she tries to keep her novels at the same price. Since my last novel published began a new series, I decided the second in the series should stick close to that price.

You can move in and out of Createspace at your own speed. When I hadn't done anything on Createspace for awhile though, they sent me an e-mail asking if they could be of assistance. I ignored the note. As you progress through the steps and save your work, you'll notice a checkmark by the items you've completed and are necessary to publish your book.

The most frustrating part of this self-publishing is how much time it consumes. I've been down in Florida since December and  haven't even started on my next novel. The other day I thought I was all set to finally order a large quantity of my novel. I had carefully proofed a downloaded copy and uploaded a corrected version to send for review. When I downloaded the new copy, I discovered my pages weren't numbered. The error had nothing to do with Createspace. It had to do with what I sent them. So my advice to you is---examine everything from top to bottom every time you send something in and save yourself a huge headache.

I want to also put my novel online for Kindle and Nook, but I've decided not to waste anymore time with that. My solution and it may end up being yours, find someone who is skilled in the process and can do it for you.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Novelist

Saturday, February 13, 2016

Topic 23 Commitment for Writers

 
                                                                 COMMITMENT

Greetings,
Happy Valentines Day.
Now that January is over and we've "all" worked on our weight loss resolutions like we wanted to, I think a new concept for February is in order. Call it Commitment Month. We already use Valentines Day to let those special people in our lives know how we feel about them with cards and gifts, but what about ourselves. We as writers could use this month to renew the goals we've set, be it big or small, it doesn't matter. Just don't throw in the towel and stop writing. You've got a gift. Use it.

So many of us feel we're just too busy nowadays with our lives to jot down those creative ideas percolating in our heads day in and day out. But think about it. If we don't do it, what will there be for our children and grandchildren to read in the future. We have wonderful literature and poetry to read only because people like Robert Frost, Carl Sandburg, Emily Dickinson, Maya de Angelo, James Michener, Vince Flynn, Agatha Christie, Isaac Asimov, Nora Roberts, and G. K. Chesterton took the time to write their thoughts down and share them with the public.

Throughout the year, I appear at festivals and events to promote my mystery novels to the public, and I've had some wonderful discussions with those readers who visit with me. Can you guess what their number 1 comment is? They've had  this or that story idea on the back burner for years and still haven't done anything about it. "Maybe I'll get around to it someday," they say. And for most of them that someday never comes.

If your hands are too crippled to write or you can't see that well, seek out someone who can do it for you. If you don't feel comfortable with a computer, laptop or Ipad, there are people out there who offer these types of services. Your stories or poems are worth sharing.

Let's be honest, for most writers who have published more than one item the first few things we wrote, be it a short story, novel or poem, didn't quite measure up to what we considered acceptable for public consumption. So what did the majority of us do? Stop writing. No. We made a commitment to continue writing and improve on it, tweaking it here and there as we go.

On this Valentines Day, let's not forget about ourselves. I'm certainly not going to. One thing I found that can slow down our progess is a book cover design. That's what I've been struggling with for several weeks now. Luckily a recent writers' meeting I attended covered that specific topic.
A. Numbers in a title get people's attention. Especially Numbers 1, 3 and 5.
B. Make it simple. Think about the wow factor.
C. Who's your audience? Look at the top ten books in your genre. What do their covers look like?
D. Don't use more than three people in a photo.
E. What's the style of lettering used in your genre?
F. If you can't find the specific photo you're looking for on the Internet, think about taking a picture yourself or hire a photographer.  

Don't forget I'd love to receive your comments on any of my blog topics.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
Mystery Author and Freelance Writer

Saturday, January 30, 2016

Topic 22 Planning for the New Year

                                                             "AND THEIR OFF"
Greetings,
The first month of the new year ends tomorrow and I'm getting a little nervous. So many things to plan for this year as a writer and I've barely gotten started. Are you in the same boat? The problem is where to start?

I learned a lot from the my first trip to the Greyhound dog races yesterday. Those wonderful dogs have speed, grace, and determination. Nothing stands in their way once the gate flies open, including rain. At Post Time their eyes are glued only on the prize, the rabbit.

Post Time is here for us too. We each need to remember to keep our eyes on the prize. Pick the best events for you as a writer to attend--be it seminars, conferences, webinar's, college classes, writing your next novel, or meeting with your readers. Only you can decide which are the most beneficial to you. According to F.W. Dupee, "Progress always involves risk: you can't steal second base and keep your foot on first." We all have to make those meaningful decisions and go for it. In order to succeed you have to take the first step. If you want to take baby steps, go right ahead as long as you see yourself moving forward not backwards.

In a Writer Unboxed article dated 1/28/2016  author Heather Webb says, "Be yourself--not someone else." She tells writers that we should be proud of what we've accomplished. Every step we take in our writing path should be celebrated regardless if you've just written a book or a chapter.

Think outside the box this year before you firmly commit to anything. One blogger shared this suggestion-- have a birthday celebration every year on the date we launched our book. Not a bad idea. Maybe we should try it. It can't hurt.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot
A Minnesota Mystery Author  
      and freelance writer



Saturday, January 16, 2016

Topic 21 Striving for the Best

Greetings from sunny Florida,
Well, at least it was today. It's been raining on and off for the past three weeks, but I shouldn't complain when people in other areas are putting up with sub-zero temperatures. It's just that when you come to Florida you expect it to be sunny everyday, without giving any thought to the beautiful vegetation surrounding you and its need for watering periodically.

Speaking of expectations, my home state of Minnesota thought they had the football game in the bag last week when the Vikings played against the Seattle Seahawks and actually lost by one point. The kicker for Minnesota's team was off the mark with his kick that could've won the game. Viewers and players were both disappointed. But a classroom of first graders wrote letters to the kicker to encourage him and make him feel better instead of crummy. Just what he needed. Kind attention.

When we fail at something, including with our writing, all we can do is brush ourselves off and start over. That's what striving for the best is all about. For me it was receiving notice that my publisher wouldn't be taking on my next novel. Did I decide to give up? No. I'm trying other venues to get my book out there for a June release. You see my readers are expecting it and I don't want to disappoint them.

The picture of the Ibis at the top of this blog was taken at the Naples Zoo the other day. Like us humans he kept trying and trying to get the little piece of metal flipped up just right so food would fall out. He didn't give up either. Eventually it paid off. His fellow bird friends were rewarded with food actually meant for fish.

Maybe the story or poem you wrote wasn't accepted by a particular venue. Don't give up. Look for other avenues for your work. There's plenty out there.  Has your teacher or friend told you your work still hasn't hit it's mark yet. Work on it. Revise. If you give up, you'll never know if your work could've been published. So, keep working at it.

It's a new year, so let's start anew. Do you want to get the right's back to your novel or stories? Here's an excellent article found at Writer Unboxed I' d like to share with you. Obtaining Reversion Publishing Rights: the Good, the bad, and the Ugly by Susan Spann  January 10, 2016. Making sure you new contracts are written right is extremely important. I asked Susan about the rights to a book cover and her reply can be seen at the bottom of her article in the COMMENTS section.

Until Next Time
This is Marlene Chabot